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Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by Maramin, Aug 31, 2021. Replies: 10 | Views: 523

  1. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Leve siseo,
    roce del caracol
    sobre una hoja.    ​
     
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    Maramin, Aug 31, 2021
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    pedroguevara Poeta asiduo al portal

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    Leve siseo,
    roce del caracol
    sobre una hoja.

    A veces poco es mucho.
     
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    pedroguevara, Aug 31, 2021
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  3. María Baena

    María Baena Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA

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    Una bella y delicada imagen. Ahora, con estas lluvias, saldrán en abundancia. Un abrazo
     
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    María Baena, Sep 1, 2021
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  4. Luciana Rubio

    Luciana Rubio Poeta veterano en el portal

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    Bellas observaciones sobre el deslizamiento de un caracol.
     
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    Luciana Rubio, Sep 1, 2021
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  5. LUZYABSENTA

    LUZYABSENTA Moder Surrealistas, Microprosas.Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Moderadores

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    Delicada imagen de una calma sentida en ese desfiladero de la naturaleza
    mas expresiva. disfrute del suave ritmo que enmarca la imagen.
    saludos siempre afectuosos de luzyabsenta
     
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    LUZYABSENTA, Nov 22, 2021
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  6. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    En efecto, amigo Pedro.

    [​IMG]
     
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    Maramin, Nov 22, 2021
  7. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Celebro, amiga María que este haiku haya sido de tu agrado.

    [​IMG]

     
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    Maramin, Nov 22, 2021
  8. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Se precisa de mucho silencio para oírlo. Gracias, amiga Luciana por tu grata visita y comentario.

    [​IMG] ​
     
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    Maramin, Nov 22, 2021
  9. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Celebro que te haya causado tan grata impresión y me obsequies con tu amable comentario.

    [​IMG] ​
     
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  10. MASTER LY 22

    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    Una bella imágen Maramin, me recuerda de niña quedarme largos ratos observatorios. Un gran abrazo con sonrisas.
     
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  11. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Justamente la mirada paciente del niño observando el movimiento del caracol sobre un hoja. Celebro, amiga Laly recibir tu aprobación.

    [​IMG] ​
     
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    Maramin, Nov 23, 2021
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