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Discussion in 'Tu Obra Maestra (en verso)' started by ezequiel nihil, Oct 9, 2007. Replies: 1 | Views: 866

  1. ezequiel nihil

    ezequiel nihil Poeta recién llegado

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    told me that hair gets caught in drain mildew bent like an overladen fruit tree
    crosses the nameless stream pero esto no me importa como el rio que bordea
    tus ingles sus hugos que huellen del melon pasado socorro vaya palabras mas
    estupidas desbordandome con todo este eloquencia y sangre. you carry it well.
    he being right. your breasts were perky. the fruit was ripe. autumn was coming.
     
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  2. Jaime1962

    Jaime1962 Poeta veterano y reconocido en el portal.

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    ezequiel, realmente un poema confuso, pero un buen intento.

    Un saludo cordial de Jaime
     
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