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Solid Darkness

Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by poroeta, Jan 17, 2006. Replies: 7 | Views: 1473

  1. poroeta

    poroeta Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    SOLID DARKNESS

    In the deep, solid darkness of my thoughts
    lies reality, lies no hope.
    Lacking power to take control
    i struggle to take something to hold
    solid ground, solid faith
    ...but shit! i can't think no more!​
     
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    poroeta, Jan 17, 2006
  2. poroeta

    poroeta Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    My long-gone creed :wink: .
     
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    poroeta, Jan 17, 2006
  3. Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa

    Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa Invitado

    Long lost creed, hugh??? ok.

    I understand that at times we may feel lost and have a desperation that there is nothingo to hold on to...but there is there always is...

    Nice rhyme!

    Love ya,
     
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    Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa, Jan 22, 2006
  4. poroeta

    poroeta Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    I luvs you back Guadalupe, thanks.
     
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    poroeta, Jan 23, 2006
  5. nangel.geo

    nangel.geo Poeta asiduo al portal

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    Nobody has solid faith but people struggles to get it. You are in the good way...

    Have a nice day,
    miguel
     
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    nangel.geo, Jan 23, 2006
  6. poroeta

    poroeta Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Thank you Miguel, you are right too, i think i am in the good way, struggle and all, is worth it. thank you.
     
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    poroeta, Jan 23, 2006
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    mariposita Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    [center:05066334a3]I like this poem.
    Short but it says enough,
    And I think we all feel that way at times...
    Quiet desperation...:wink:
    Take care, ¡saludosss!    [/center:05066334a3]
     
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    mariposita, Jan 23, 2006
  8. poroeta

    poroeta Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Thank you mariposita, at the time i wrote that, i felt everyword of it, i felt darkness like the only reality in my mind, without hope, those were days where nothing, nothingness filled my life and my thoughts, pure, whole solid darkness, but....is over now! thank you.
     
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    poroeta, Jan 23, 2006

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