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Spring Kiss

Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by lluviadeabril, Oct 12, 2009. Replies: 6 | Views: 729

  1. lluviadeabril

    lluviadeabril lluvia & rain

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    A gentle graze,
    proverbial fingers touch my face,
    navigating long strands of curls.
    Striking eyes seize my eyes.
    I covet.

    A stare,
    an incomparable gaze attains
    the deepest parts of me,
    reading, owning every thought and want.
    I collapse.

    April.

    Kiss after gentle kiss
    rains from his lips,
    a taste of spring sweetness.

    A warm breeze, I am still.
    Warmth chills my neck.
    Lips leisurely trail amid
    my neck and shoulders.

    An embrace.
    [SIZE=3]I’m lost in the moment of his embrace. [/SIZE]
    [FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]I live here. [/SIZE]

    [FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]Time stops, if only for a second, [/SIZE]
    [FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]one minute, this once, he is still.[/SIZE]
    [FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]He is mine, this once.[/SIZE]

    [FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]An incessant heart beat.[/SIZE]

    [FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]I shut my eyes to hear my heart [/SIZE]
    [FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]and to think, to convince myself [/SIZE]
    [FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]the time has come.[/SIZE]

    [FONT=Times New Roman][SIZE=3]It is time to go.








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    lluviadeabril, Oct 12, 2009
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  2. JOP PIOBB

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    Ur poem's very interesting. I congratulate u. I star and repute u.
     
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    JOP PIOBB, Oct 15, 2009
  3. lluviadeabril

    lluviadeabril lluvia & rain

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    Thank you so much for your comments and taking the time to repute me..

    I am especially grateful that you enjoyed the poem as I consider you very talented.

    -Regards
     
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    lluviadeabril, Oct 15, 2009
  4. Mask

    Mask Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    mmmm thaank you....

    (es mi aporte)....te dije no se inglès
     
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    Mask, Oct 15, 2009
  5. lluviadeabril

    lluviadeabril lluvia & rain

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    Mask,

    Habla de un beso en la primavera que doblega la voluntad y se adueña del tiempo..Tanto que la empuja a dejar de escribir : )

    -Besos y gracias amigo.
     
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    lluviadeabril, Oct 15, 2009
  6. Inferno du Doleur

    Inferno du Doleur Poeta adicto al portal

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    I think I´m in love with your poeam, lluviadeabril. So lovely and cute.
    This is the part I liked the most:

    It is a pleasure to read you.
     
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    Inferno du Doleur, Oct 16, 2009
  7. lluviadeabril

    lluviadeabril lluvia & rain

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    Thank you so much, I am ecstatic that you like it! That also is one of my favorite parts--imagine if we could really stop time.

    -warm regards
     
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    lluviadeabril, Oct 17, 2009

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