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Spring sonnet

Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by Francisco Redondo Benito, Apr 23, 2007. Replies: 2 | Views: 1036

  1. Francisco Redondo Benito

    Francisco Redondo Benito Moderador/enseñante del subforo de MÉTRICA y RIMA

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    Far away out of bounds of my sunrise,
    lost in the past my earliest April’s perfumes,
    from May my shoes, from August my costumes,
    I have found in your love my paradise.

    Let us sip out this gay Spring’s the pleasure,
    walk along this delightful bloomy meadow;
    I shall admire, when you get out the shadow,
    how in the light your hair is a treasure.

    Look that prairie. If you like, this sunny day,
    which lustful Pan’s the breathing sets on fire,
    we can enjoy of our bodies the feasting.

    Then, when Sun shows its last tragical ray
    and Night pours ice and peace on desire
    we shall return fairly tired to resting.
     
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  2. Francisco Redondo Benito

    Francisco Redondo Benito Moderador/enseñante del subforo de MÉTRICA y RIMA

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    Pues mucha suerte, Lui-Lu, porque solo accidentalmente coincidiría mi soneto con ese esquema, aunque no lo excluyo. Un pentámetro yámbico equivaldría en el sistema métrico de T. Navarro y R. Baehr a un endecasílabo a minori trocaico, acentuado en sus sílabas de orden par. Quizá se pueda hallar alguno con esa estructura en mi Spring sonnet.
    Un saludo.
     
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    Francisco Redondo Benito Moderador/enseñante del subforo de MÉTRICA y RIMA

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    Un saludo y suerte.
     
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