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Discussion in 'Foro para Haiku, orígenes y derivados' started by Maramin, Oct 16, 2021. Replies: 6 | Views: 426

  1. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Todas las tardes​
    a tu puerta me acerco
    nunca me abres.

    En el camino un surco
    han grabado mis pies.​
     
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    Maramin, Oct 16, 2021
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  2. MASTER LY 22

    MASTER LY 22 Laly

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    Hermoso versos Maramin, tienen mucha dulzura. Un gran abrazo.
     
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  3. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Celebro que haya sido de tu agrado este senryû-tanka. estimada Laly.

    [​IMG] ​
     
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    Maramin, Oct 17, 2021
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    LUZYABSENTA Moder Surrealistas, Microprosas.Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Moderadores

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    entrega dulce en esa obsidiana donde las tardes se pierden aunque el sentido
    sea entrega absoluta..., creo que ella no comprende el interes. me gusto
    el bello ambiente que crea tu obra. saludos de luzyabsenta
     
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    LUZYABSENTA, Oct 17, 2021
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  5. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Staff Member Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Dura la obsidiana pero el continuado roce también la desgasta, celebro amigo Carlos que haya sido de tu agrado este breve poema.

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    Te invito a leer: http://www.mundopoesia.com/foros/temas/dos-cafes-y-un-comienzo.739988/
     
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  6. María Baena

    María Baena Miembro del Jurado Staff Member Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA

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    Delicioso Tanka Maesto. Que constancia Y dulzura. !
     
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    Celebro que te haya agradado, amiga María.

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