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Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by Sol Mircovich, Apr 17, 2008. Replies: 4 | Views: 1122

  1. Sol Mircovich

    Sol Mircovich Moderadora del Taller de gramática/ Princesita de Moderador enseñante

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    ,

    I try
    not to convey
    my feelings
    with anyone

    They don't have
    why to carry
    with my own grief

    But it's impossible
    to hide
    that I miss
    your tenderness

    God might be
    truly thankful
    because
    you're there
    with Him
     
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    Sol Mircovich, Apr 17, 2008
  2. Sol Mircovich

    Sol Mircovich Moderadora del Taller de gramática/ Princesita de Moderador enseñante

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    Thanks!
    Take care

    Sol.
     
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    Sol Mircovich, Jun 5, 2008
  3. Esme

    Esme Poeta adicto al portal

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    It's always of great pleasure to read your poems. This one couldn't be as sweet or more wonderful than the others :). Love and Kisssessss!!!​
     
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    Esme, Jun 5, 2008
  4. Sol Mircovich

    Sol Mircovich Moderadora del Taller de gramática/ Princesita de Moderador enseñante

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    Thanks for your comment.
    You're very sweet.
    Take care

    Sol.
     
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    Sol Mircovich, Aug 14, 2008
  5. poroeta

    poroeta Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Have to say >> your english is a little, a tid bit, a tad broken (but then again..who's perfect?). That said, i have to sayeth :::lengua1::: that you 'convey' your sadness just as good as if there were no cracks in your layout... best to you.
     
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    poroeta, Sep 3, 2008

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