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Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by AUGUSTO SILVA ACEVEDO, Mar 27, 2017. Replies: 2 | Views: 593

  1. AUGUSTO SILVA ACEVEDO

    AUGUSTO SILVA ACEVEDO Poeta veterano en MP

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    THAT WAY.

    I could try, without anxiety,

    To create some verses, to describe

    That grin, that arises from your face,

    In the strange dimension of a century,

    Which always leaves; But maybe I should

    Learn from poets, that form and

    That vision of beauty, and the

    Creation of the universe and of God himself.

    Augus 27 March 2017.
     
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    AUGUSTO SILVA ACEVEDO, Mar 27, 2017
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    Ulpiano Obrero de la Poesía

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    Dear Augusto,

    you have written a beautiful poem, with a touch of humility. Do you think you should learn from poets?

    I don't believe it. You are a real poet. If you do this in English, how good will it be in your native language, which I suspect is Spanish?

    A fraternal and great hug,

    Ulpiano
     
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    Ulpiano, Mar 30, 2017
  3. AUGUSTO SILVA ACEVEDO

    AUGUSTO SILVA ACEVEDO Poeta veterano en MP

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    Thank Ulpiano, you are a grate motivator...
     
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    AUGUSTO SILVA ACEVEDO, Apr 3, 2017

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