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Unforgettable.

Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by Roman Vieira, Oct 20, 2012. Replies: 4 | Views: 862

  1. Roman Vieira

    Roman Vieira El cuervo rojo que te observa en silencio.

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    Unforgettable.

    I left her on the corner of my mind​
    while I ran away in silence.​
    Spiders carved a web to hide her,​
    I was lonely but felt at ease.

    A little voice whispered in my head​
    the words of love I tossed a side,​
    bitter poison filled my mouth,​
    an oath to make forget.

    Rotten corpses coming back,​
    a queen of black smiling wide.​
    Lullaby of sadness,​
    a fairy lost at night in me.

    Howls of wolves at distance​
    speaking tongues of love, despair.​
    And while I was reaching out for midnight…​
    I found the monster she became.

    -Unforgettable-
     
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  2. Glendalis Lugo

    Glendalis Lugo Poeta veterano en el portal

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    Is a wonderful poem full of great images is nice to read you, please keep writing.
     
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  3. Roman Vieira

    Roman Vieira El cuervo rojo que te observa en silencio.

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    Thanks Glendalis, it is a pleasure to have you here.
     
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  4. Pemberley Winter

    Pemberley Winter Poeta asiduo al portal

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    I think I have to go to hell 'cause when I thought of that monster girl...the word fell from my mouth: BITCH.
    Don't even ask why I said that, just don't..
    I think that if you truly love someone, you fight for him. But if that love destroys you, is better to let go, to forget. You can always start again. FRESH!
    It was nice to read you, love u and don't let the corpses and ghosts haunt you!!!
    tons of spicy kisses
    Pemb
     
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  5. Roman Vieira

    Roman Vieira El cuervo rojo que te observa en silencio.

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    Jajajaja, you just made me laugh like crazy... "Bitch" XD. And as you said, i won't ask, but i do have to tell you... that i'm still laughing XD.

    Yes, it's true, one must fight but still know when to retreat... and start againg but fresh.

    Nope, no corpeses and ghosts hunting me... in fact, i'm the one chasing after you... but not everything is creepy (I think) ;)

    Tons of hugs and extra spicy kisses my dear and pretty pemb, thank for letting me know you're here.
     
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