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What happens?

Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by Draket, Jun 13, 2006. Replies: 6 | Views: 1016

  1. Draket

    Draket Poeta asiduo al portal

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    What happens?
    When the Light of my life is fading
    When the songs sound like noises
    When my heartbeat slows down

    What happens?
    If every night I do not dream of you
    If in your eyes I do not see the fire
    If my voice do not say I love you

    What happens?
    every morning waking up without you
    every afternoon with extinguished sunset
    every evening dinning alone

    What happens?
    When outside is raining and one of us, does not want to come in
    If late in the evening we are tired but do not want to go to the bed
    every place of the house where we avoid to share air

    Maybe the love is fading
    Maybe the love is dying
    Maybe the love never existed
    That’s what happens
     
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  2. DEJAVU

    DEJAVU Poeta adicto al portal

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    It's a good write friend; it just needs a little polishing but the ideas charge on strong.



    DEJAVU
     
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  3. tamarapastrana

    tamarapastrana Poeta fiel al portal

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    I REALY LIKE IT, IT A GOOD AND HEARTFELT POEM...KISSES...TaM...
     
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  4. Asdrymarie

    Asdrymarie Poeta recién llegado

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    Otras hermosas palabras tuyas ke brotan muy hermosas de tus manos ... Lo que paso es que el amor juega al esconder y aveces hasta se va y pierde el camino de regreso a casa. El amor cuando se pierde busca un nuevo sentir para asi nunca padeser de amor... Si ya No existe el amor camina en un nuevo rumbo amigo mio :) Precioso me gusto mucho!
     
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  5. Draket

    Draket Poeta asiduo al portal

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    THANX FOR YOUR WORDS, NAD FOR BEING HERE READING THIS SIMPLE WORDS

    kiSSES AND HUGS
     
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  6. Draket

    Draket Poeta asiduo al portal

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    THanx for you help, your reading and your words
     
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  7. Draket

    Draket Poeta asiduo al portal

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    Thanx For Being Here, Princess Miyu, My Heart Goes With You
     
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