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White Souls

Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by jesse salas, Jun 15, 2007. Replies: 13 | Views: 1363

  1. jesse salas

    jesse salas Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    White Souls

    The children's laughter jump with the cotton
    of their innocents. Tiptoeing on the silver bear
    of the old time,....that does not know hours nor
    wears a watch. The strong carob tree offerts it's
    arms to the rainbow that swing from it,
    Dragging its nude feet bye the blond hair of the
    the wheat,...that grow far way from the from the
    blind heatred. That sheltered by its scarf of
    badness,.....that crosses between the red river of
    its war's. In a word with a sky that is dripping
    fear and evil; on a field painted with the fingers of
    peace,......to the skirt of the noble oak...small clovers
    sprout raising white Souls bells of fire.
    On the parchment of life,....with love unfolding
    short song nightingale. Tear s of Angel of our
    humanity.

    [COLOR=#0000ff]Jesse Salas[/COLOR]
     
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  2. Mujer_azul

    Mujer_azul Poeta adicto al portal

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    [SIZE="3"][COLOR="Blue"]The symbols that you use to represent the war, the blood, La Paz, the innocence of the victims... that resistance of the threatened nature... They do of this poem something very special. you portray your Jess. soul. samples your great and noble soul... you are in all your humanity. A hug For your white soul of this blue woman[/COLOR][/SIZE]
     
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  3. Mujer_azul

    Mujer_azul Poeta adicto al portal

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    Los símbolos que usas para representar la guerra , la sangre , la paz , la inocencia de las víctimas... ese contraste de la naturaleza amenazada... Hacen de este poema algo muy especial.

    retratas tu alma Jess .. muestras tu alma grande y noble ... te muestras en toda tu humanidad . Un abrazo Para tu alma blanca de esta mujer azul
     
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  4. Mayba

    Mayba Invitado

    White souls it's a beautiful expression and it is more than that in your poem, our world grows with this white souls even when we can't see heaven....love your poetry and send you a big hug........








    __________________________________________---:::hug:::
     
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  5. jesse salas

    jesse salas Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Mujer Azul thank You so much. for always be near Me. that really feel so good to know You are their for me. send You lots of kisses. from this lonely heart. Jess
     
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    jesse salas Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Mayba thank You for Your beautiful words. and for getting here to my poem
    is nice to see people undestand, what really happen in real lfe. thank You againg here. Your friend Jess
     
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  7. ERA

    ERA Invitado

    Heart felt. Dense forest of simbolism. Indeed, you paint the scene of lost paradise.
     
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  8. jesse salas

    jesse salas Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Era this is a poema about humanity. and the wars that man kill his own brother leaving the child inside behind. thank You por been here is an honor
    Jess
     
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  9. roska

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    my English is very deficient nevertheless I understand enough, your poem is beautty.
    Hug, I read to you
     
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  10. jesse salas

    jesse salas Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    roska gracias mi amiga por llegar y dejar el brillo de tu pluma aqui entre mis letras mis saludos y respetos desde aqui Jess
     
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  11. Vicente Prandt Gambi

    Vicente Prandt Gambi Moderador Mundo Poeta Brasil

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    podria traducir para el español tu poema??? Creyo que eres bello, pero no lo compreendo
     
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  12. GRECHKA LEE MALDONADO

    GRECHKA LEE MALDONADO Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Jesse...mi bello dejas plasmado aqui todo un deroche de sentimientos
    tocando las fibras de mi corazon...muy profundo tu sentir,un placer
    leerte hoy...muchos besos para ti:::hug:::
     
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  13. jesse salas

    jesse salas Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Vicente. gracias mi joven amigo y seguro lo traducire gracias por detenerte un saludos desde aqui Jess
     
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    jesse salas Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    GRECHKA Gracias mi bella amiga siempre es bueno tener tus huellas aqui en mis letras desde aqui besos mis saludos tu amigo Jess
     
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