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Your silence

Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by the.jester, Apr 23, 2012. Replies: 4 | Views: 698

  1. the.jester

    the.jester Poeta recién llegado

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    YOUR SILENCE

    'Cause your silence's like a torment please write some lines for me again

    'Cause I feel you'd heal the wounds that my loneliness draws on my chest

    'Cause your beauty's the only thing my eyes can't get tired of yielding to
    And a voice inside my heart tells me you're the one to give it to

    Don't let me know the taste of rout
    Don't sink again my heart in doubt
    Please say you'll stop the tears I drop
    'Cause you've become my only hope

    Your silence's my sorrow
    It's got me obsessed
    It's just like a torture
    That's breaking my faith
    Do I plead in vain?
    Are my dreams a waste?
    Will you fill the void created by time and by pain?

    'Cause I spend my days thinking of you, counting them, waiting for you
    To remember what you said one day, that I'm ideal for you


    So much time longing to release my heart
    Now I find freedom was not my sole lack
    So much time locked in a prison of words
    I broke free just to taste my lack of love


    The Jester (12/02/2012)​
     
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  2. Lunacyrcus

    Lunacyrcus Poeta recién llegado

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    That was intense!

    you describe so well your suffering

    congrats

    loved your poem
     
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  3. the.jester

    the.jester Poeta recién llegado

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    Thanks for your coment
     
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  4. Glendalis Lugo

    Glendalis Lugo Poeta veterano en el portal

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    Very intense and sad is glad to read you
     
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  5. Dawn

    Dawn Poeta recién llegado

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    ooh so beauty! *.* I really know about that feeling, silence is a soul's torture, the precedent of a Death Foretold... but hope... love's hope must never end. 5 Stars for you again.

    And sorry for my bad english =S
     
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