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And this is the way,
Now I’m here again
Breathing my loneliness
And eating my pain…

Once upon a time
I had a soul,
Once upon a time
I was alive

Sited on the moon
I had a dream
While you were away
While you were far

Walking through the space
I founded a heart
Walking through heavens
I founded you…

Lied down on the stars
My feelings gone
Lied down on the stars
I ran out of your love

Kissing to the dead
I lost my mind,
I lost my dreams,
I lost you again….

Now I know you are happy
Now I know you have someone
Today I leaved my heart alone
Today I miss your love……

 

:bienvenido:Welcome!!!
Very nice poem. I am happy you have found our place for posting poems in different languages. Hope to see you around. take care.

 

pues cometiste algunos errores con el lenguage, minimos verdad pero pues en general me gusto mucho tu poema. oye me dejarias usarlo, eske para una clase d literatura tengo una tarea d llevar un poema y pues el tuyo me parece muy bien. bueno espero tu respuesta. bye

 

asi claro q lo puedes usar no tengo ningun inconveniente...y muchas gracias por tus cmenarios