A room away

I remember rooms that have had their part​

In the steady slowing down of the heart…;​

Charlotte Mew (Rooms)​

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An embrace in rooms that tear apart
a mind with incinerating fervor
in between bouts of sanity
that yield, but to a tactful hand
my breath accelerating anguish.

And room awaits with empty
floors for bare feet to walk
upon them, skin and bone
fall evenly and subtle noise
of touching souls cover the spaces.

[SIZE=3]Nothing hangs there from[/SIZE]
[FONT=Centaur][SIZE=3]any wall, but the chambers[/SIZE]
[FONT=Centaur][SIZE=3]summon you and I to lie and rest [/SIZE]
[FONT=Centaur][SIZE=3]a peaceful break before the night begins[/SIZE]
[FONT=Centaur][SIZE=3]again, exhaustion calms the noises.[/SIZE]
[FONT=Centaur][SIZE=3] [/SIZE]
[FONT=Centaur][SIZE=3]Before day breaks, a touch, [/SIZE]
[FONT=Centaur][SIZE=3]your foot awakes and I’m, but[/SIZE]
[FONT=Centaur][SIZE=3]helpless for every fiber of my[/SIZE]
[FONT=Centaur][SIZE=3]being calls out it’s quiet and[/SIZE]
[FONT=Centaur][SIZE=3]I hate it.[/SIZE]
[FONT=Centaur][SIZE=3] [/SIZE]
[FONT=Centaur][SIZE=3]You heed and mellow music[/SIZE]
[FONT=Centaur][SIZE=3]follows in the spaces while[/SIZE]
[FONT=Centaur][SIZE=3]day breaks.[/SIZE]
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[FONT=Centaur][SIZE=3]And your beard whispers a tickle.[/SIZE][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT]

 

[FONT=Centaur][FONT=Centaur][FONT=Centaur][FONT=Centaur][FONT=Centaur][FONT=Centaur][FONT=Centaur]It is always a pleasure to read you April because you leave me breathless every time.
Pretty good rithm and images, passion, a very interesting descrition of the emotions and night toughts... i think i can't express what i'm trying to say so i'm sorry for it.
Hugs for you april, thanks for letting us read you, it truly is amazing.[/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font]

 

You understood it well and I appreciate your comment. If you should ever have the chance read some of Mew's work.

A hug.

 

Magnificent April!, The rythm, the structure, the clear images I could see in my face!. Oh and I must not forget those words that expressed your feelings. Excellent room you created....at least for me.
Hugs, Pemb

 

Dear friend “April Rain”,
Reading this poem, I may think that I’m entering into a magic world where your magic room has been created. A room which awaits with empty floors while the subtle noise of touching souls cover all its spaces, where your loving friend and you are summoned to lie and rest, but that subtle noise is calmed by the exhaustation. Isn’t that magic? The day also breaks magically after a mellow music continues in the spaces.
I like your poetry very much because it touches me and it has a high quality. You’re a magician creating wonderful poems. Thanks for sharing them with us. Thanks for giving me the honor to congratulate you every time you post a poem.
Fraternally,
Ramiro

 

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A pleasure to pass and to enjoy your lines, folded of shades of intense sadness. Kisses[/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font]

 

Thank you Pem-

The room that you imagine is your own poem -write it.

A hug.

 

Thank you so much Ramiro,

Magic is what you read when you allow yourself to be taken in through your eyes -for me "magic" as you call it comes easier when I write in English (I'm deeply saddened by this) -perharps that's what you see.

Thanks again, a warm hug.

 

Thank you --actually this is one of my happier poems, but then again, sadness as is beauty always lies in the eyes of the beholder.

A warm hug.