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As The Rain Pours Down...

Tema en 'La Torre de Babel' comenzado por Pemberley Winter, 30 de Enero de 2012. Respuestas: 4 | Visitas: 697

  1. Pemberley Winter

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    It comes the storm, the deep sound,
    the screaming, the smiles taken.
    As the rain pours down, memories will be washed.
    Promises will be broken.
    And love...well...love will be forgoten.

    As the rain pours down, your scent will disappear
    I won't feel stalked anymore.
    I'll lay myself in the grass waiting for hope.

    I'll catch a glimpse by the window, I won't stare
    Happiness may come right now, as the rain pours down.

    Actually, never care about getting wet.
    This is where I belong, not afraid of death.
    Clean all of me, make me bright.
    I'm ready, listening to the beat of my heart.

    As the rain pours down, I know the sky is turning black.
    I know it's my time, tears won't last long now.
    The thunder might be scary, but hesitation it's not my thing.
    As the rains pours down, I know it's changing time.
    My favourite time of day, Yes...I'm starting fresh.

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  2. Roman Vieira

    Roman Vieira El cuervo rojo que te observa en silencio.

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    As the rain pours down you accept a new beginig and all the stuff that will happen until then... it makes me think (something i barely do XD). Is this... "acceptation" of the events as good as it sounds? Yes, for one part it is, but on the other... it sounds like giving up, and of course, i'm bad at giving up, it's justa that sometimes onemust surrender and try to start from the begining (clean). Maybe this i'll only understand myself but... what i'm trying to say is that i liked your poem... it hits me and i'm agree with every single line you wrote.

    Starting fresh? sounds cool XD (yeah, that's for not to miss my horrible jokes)

    Hugs pemby, lots of them and well... thanks for coming back so soon =D
     
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  3. Pemberley Winter

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    I think that it always comes a time of ending stuff. To put a stop to them. And what better solution that starting fresh? Things to let go, memories to forget, and most important....people to forget and to let them go. Starting fresh can be hard, but sometimes is the best thing we can do.

    Thanks for coming :D !!!!
    Hugs and kisses!
    Pemb
     
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  4. lluviadeabril

    lluviadeabril lluvia & rain

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    Stopping by one of yours –in this one, you turn gloom into light unfolding thoughts into more than a new day.
    Touching lines, Pemb.
    All the hugs.
     
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  5. Pemberley Winter

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    Glad you stopped! Yes!, that's correct. Forgetting things sometimes is the best thing we can do.
    Kisses
    Pemb
     
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