Awake

AWAKE​

I walked alone trough ​

The desert of gold​

I runned away today and yesterday​

Just to find out that nothing was chasing me​

Just to see that the monsters were forward​

I talked to my shadow my whole life​

I fight with no sword and no enemies for a thousand years​

I tried and i try but...​

No cage will contain my rage​

Never been crazy never will be...​

I see the shadow around me,​

White shadows of fear​

Shiny shadow in the dirty meadows​

Somewhere in this madness​

People isn’t here, im with a millon of dogs​

And then i just run again in the desert of silver​

Better run with my hands and not with my feets this time​

Nothing is in nowhere​

Where you and me do not exist​

Im angry with my senses,​

I walked trough the clouds but my shield wasn’t there​

North and south by the same time​

Did that kid do that thing​

Im blue now​

Where was i?​

I was fighting against directions​

I was lost in the desert of bronze,​

Been chased, running scared​

What?​

Not again!​

Run blue run just for fun​

My shadow talks to me and tells me ​

to go to a place far away from dreams​

but i like the meadows​

i just love the smell of rotten meadows in the night​

i got no eyes!​

Oh im looking at clouds​

I was there once upon a time​

But my shield betrayed me and my sword just dissapear​

Now rage consumes me but i dont care​

Why was i so angry?​

That thing that was after me ​

It was made of wood​

Now i understand the meaning of been lost​

The meaning is:...​

AWAKE!!​

 

Al menos lo entendiste...:::blush::: No siempre se puede vivir en el sueño...
Hay una realidad, que aunque no nos guste, existe!:::gafas1:::

Amigo, sería mejor que pasaras el poema al español, pues así se comparte mejor:::lengua1:::

Te dejo miles de estrellas fugaces:::banana:::Fue un placer leerte

Un abrazo cósmico :::hug:::​

 

i loved it... i thought i was the only one that made poems in english!! it's very passionate, though you wrote "runned" instead of "ran" which is the past of "run", it's ok... look, i know it might sound weird but i'd like u to check out my blog, there are some poems there in english, you just have to look for them, and maybe u'd like to check out the ones in spanish too!
http://iroxxie-elizabethtown-mexico.blogspot.com

I hope we keep hearing from u and ur english poems.. it would be aweful if we didn't!
Keep inspiring urself

 

Nice reading about your dream, more like a nightmare. keep up the good work, salutations.