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Broken Wings

Tema en 'La Torre de Babel' comenzado por Speaker for the Dead, 21 de Abril de 2008. Respuestas: 2 | Visitas: 932

  1. Speaker for the Dead

    Speaker for the Dead Poeta recién llegado

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    Broken Wings

    She could fly no more,
    The cruelty of a life
    Her patterned wings tore.

    She had been deprived
    From ever reaching the sun,
    And no matter how much she tried
    It seemed as if her time was gone.

    Breathing with difficulty she cried,
    She cried to the gods, she cried to the stars,
    But no one would listen
    For they were all lies.

    She could fly no more,
    The cruelty of a life
    Her frail wings tore.

    Ill with despair
    She knelt down to die.
    Life hadn’t been fair,
    The strings could not be tied.

    Darkness covered the all.
    Empty was her soul now.
    No light could reach her core.
    All she could do was bow,

    Bow to her sorrow and pain.
    Blood, tears, and ice,
    Was that all she would ever gain?

    No more could she fly.
    Her fading wings, life tore.
    She knelt down to die;
    The ice had reached her core.


    -Enderkichi- キち
     
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  2. Agnimascerodonte

    Agnimascerodonte Invitado

    Me han dejado estupefacto la fuerza y crudeza de las imágenes. Helado y acongojada el alma. Comprimido el corazón como si una mano cruel le arrancara de mi pecho.
     
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  3. fragilprincesa

    fragilprincesa Poeta asiduo al portal

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    what a sad poem, but so beautiful, i just can image the suffer of those people who can't reach the sky, is so sad to hear the things you describe but thats the sad reality
    hope to read you soon
     
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