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Chorusless song

Tema en 'La Torre de Babel' comenzado por Marks, 1 de Agosto de 2020. Respuestas: 2 | Visitas: 41

  1. Marks

    Marks Poeta asiduo al portal

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    I am designing an up-to-date flat
    I am resigning myself to a home tour
    I am singing the pandemic's blues

    I am feeling the urge to be sensible
    I am trying to be analytical
    I am rolling with these warlike changes

    I am climbing my own simple words
    I am crossing the spirit of armageddon
    I am checking eschatology

    I am drifting through the current landmark
    I am writing this chorusless song
    I am versifying these lonely *I ams*

    I am honeymooning in Playboy magazine
    I am daydreaming about laptops and TVs
    I am cultivating a forced empathy

    I am assembling this new reality
    I am tightroping across the unseen enemy
    I am cheering from my balcony

    ... ...


    (Songlyrics / letras para una canciòn)

    Written: July - 08 - 2020
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    To be frank, I did not try to be creative...
    To be honest, there was neither outer inspiration nor inner inspiration...
    I did not feel motivated to do anything but just write these songlyrics.
    ______This *slight speeding up* song has no *chorus* (no hook, no bridge),...
    its verses crawl and crawl ... miles of global places.

    ______________________________________________________

    IMAGE: Balcony with a statue of a boy on its balustrade, in Antwerp (Belgium)
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  2. Gustavo Cervantes

    Gustavo Cervantes un loco en la cornisa

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    nice try...
    poetry is at most pretty much at any time..
    peace or war... happiness and self retreat.
     
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  3. Marks

    Marks Poeta asiduo al portal

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    Gracias por su comentario.
    Thank you for your comment.
    ... ... ...
     
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