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Tema en 'La Torre de Babel' comenzado por Pemberley Winter, 9 de Diciembre de 2010. Respuestas: 5 | Visitas: 740

  1. Pemberley Winter

    Pemberley Winter Poeta asiduo al portal

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    Come back to me,
    help me to progress, the clock never stops, never waits, it is always running.

    Come back, give me strengh, I can't follow you.
    Come back, show me the right path.
    I don't want to make mistakes, not anymore.

    I'm clueless, I'm blind, I left everything behind.
    My eyes are with you, my heart and soul follows you.

    Here is a secret you might not know.
    But the truth is 'I love you'. And I want to stay with you.

    But please come back, show me life.
    I'm ready to learn, and I'm ready to fly away.
    You are my mate, you are my fate.

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  2. Redwing

    Redwing Invitado

    Yes, you're back and with the heart exposed, i'm glad to see you again.

    I could say lots of things about this one, but i'll try and keep it simple: Says there that you're blind and you miss him... ok, that is a normal feeling as far as i know (yes, i'm clueless about that kind of emotion) the poem is sad but... i can feel so much energy flowing on it, and somehow i feel that in a positive way, but maybe i'm just mistaken.
    You know, if i were him, i would take your hand and show you everything you miss when you're sad and blind.

    I hope to read you soon again 'cause i like to do it every time.

    Hugs for you pemb.
     
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  3. Pemberley Winter

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    Dear Red,
    I will be always bloody grateful of having such a friend like you in this website. You know...lately, I've been absent and clueless, about everything. I've tried, but I didn't succed, I've tried to move on, but I couldn't return. I think that maybe today is the day when Pemberley winter is coming back. But of course, as the poem also says, I need help-
    You will read me soon, I promise. And remember I'll always be here reading you, even if you don't see me :)
    Hugs, Red. TONSSS OF HUGS.
    Pemb.
     
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  4. lluviadeabril

    lluviadeabril lluvia & rain

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    Hey Pem,

    Beautiful lines from the heart that sum it all up at tbe end. Your poem reminded me of a song "Soulmate" by Natasha Bedingfield. Have you heard the song? The lyrics are a bit cheesy, but the idea not so much..:)

    Anyway, sorry to go on, and on...

    A huge hug and all the stars..
     
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  5. Pemberley Winter

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    Dear April Rain,
    How wonderful is to hear from you again. I've missed you!!..hmm..interesting..I know Natasha...but not that song!- I will hear it, I promise. Thank you so much for being here.
    Hugs, Pemb

    pd: you can go on and on, you are my friend!, you can say everything you want :D
     
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  6. lluviadeabril

    lluviadeabril lluvia & rain

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    .............. :) :) ..................
     
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