Disgracefully close

lluviadeabril

lluviadeabril

lluvia & rain
To be so close
your breath feeding my breath
-flesh-
veins running through veins
-sustenance-
the chest shelters you near
to touch an image in my head, just one more step
-stillness-
the chill that settles in, trying to think in an interrupted place
-let go, wait…
I want to hear beyond your thoughts
the right and wrong –what is it, do you know?
- your eyes-
beyond the second that splits veins at every stare
just one of yours
and a pitiful attempt to disobey

-the flesh, and thought and veins-

I cannot and I fall
every time
disgracefully close

-asking for more-
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Wow, I'm having a hard tme trying to say something understandable about this one... i'll try my best, lets see:

It is very tranquil but yet there is the passion... something very well writen, and thos parts like -Flesh, ustenance, and etc- give it a much more imaginable space on my mind also making it stronger and enjoyable at it's best... (holy god, it's happening again today... pleasant, very pleasant -.-'). As i was saying, i find this fascinating, i mean, i can take it as something phisical or rather something mental... as if you were barely wantig to make love to thought or an idea... -.- is it normal that i would like to beliee it's the second way? yeah, better stop now.

This one goes to my favorites from now on... and by the way, can i ask you for more and fall disgracefully close? -.-

None stop kisses.
 
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Starlight dijo:
Wow, I'm having a hard tme trying to say something understandable about this one... i'll try my best, lets see:

It is very tranquil but yet there is the passion... something very well writen, and thos parts like -Flesh, ustenance, and etc- give it a much more imaginable space on my mind also making it stronger and enjoyable at it's best... (holy god, it's happening again today... pleasant, very pleasant -.-'). As i was saying, i find this fascinating, i mean, i can take it as something phisical or rather something mental... as if you were barely wantig to make love to thought or an idea... -.- is it normal that i would like to beliee it's the second way? yeah, better stop now.

This one goes to my favorites from now on... and by the way, can i ask you for more and fall disgracefully close? -.-

None stop kisses.
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Ha! Ha! -I am so glad you liked it. No response from me. Remember -it's all in the interpretation. Your dissertation lends so much to these otherwise simple lines -I will not spoil that with an explanation - by the way the rhyme was unintentional. Like so many other things I do.:)


Hugs, hugs and more hugs.
 
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