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Doppelganger

Tema en 'La Torre de Babel' comenzado por aldocm80, 23 de Noviembre de 2019. Respuestas: 4 | Visitas: 86

  1. aldocm80

    aldocm80 Poeta recién llegado

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    Come back, don't fade away
    If things come darker, It will be the end
    Maybe I won't be able to stay here
    And insanity finally stands its way

    Leave the memories behind this time
    And let your imagination do the rest
    It wouldn't be hard to figure it out
    After all, back then, I did for you the same.

    Help me and we can rewrite the pain and sorrow
    The scars won't be in your mind, they will heal,
    Everything you lost, will be yours and mine as well
    Not a doppelganger anymore, just a normal being.

    Guess I' ve lied before, I truly don't know
    A broken history wasn't enough I suppose
    But you and I were one many years ago
    A foolish boy, about to torn his reality apart.
     
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  2. Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa

    Guadalupe Cisneros-Villa Miembro del Jurado: Surrealista y Góticos Miembro del Equipo Miembro del JURADO DE LA MUSA

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    A doppelganger is supposed to be a ghostly apparition that appear as a double or a twin. It was a pleasure to read and learn from your poem, I have never heard this term and it was interesting to search information…

    Hugs and kisses,
     
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    Última modificación: 24 de Noviembre de 2019
    A Felipe Antonio Santorelli le gusta esto.
  3. aldocm80

    aldocm80 Poeta recién llegado

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    Thanks for your words, It means a lot to me, and actually I'm trying to get back all of this, the pasión and time to write and let loose everything inside me.
     
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  4. Ulpiano

    Ulpiano Obrero de la Poesía

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    Tender and shocking poem, dear poet and friend aldocm80, your prodigious imagination shares with us. There is a coherence in all your verses as if they were a plea to return your loved one. You ask her not to fade away because now you will love her as a real being, since now both of you are not a single being anymore. The pain and sadness will end and you both will recover everything lost, making the reader hope that love will belong to both of you again.

    Very well you interpret the word you title the poem, word derived from the German Doppelgänger. This poetry is a sample of English language proficiency and an excellent sample of sublimated poetic art.

    With my congratulations, a strong and fraternal hug,

    Ulpiano
     
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  5. Flor de agosto

    Flor de agosto Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    I truly enjoyed this inspiration. Mainly because I have encountered a doppelgänger... that ghosted me.
    wonderful inspiration, interesting point of view.
     
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