El otro hombre

Is nice to hear your voice
Is good to taste your lips
but is not healthy to keep living in a fantasy of you and me

We almost had it all,the love,the trust, and even the smiles
but you forgot who you were, and started to be a new guy.

Cold and twisty, specially with me. You talked about stuff
with no importance, like the stuff called "me"

Now you even talk, and I was left behind. You say that it was an
infatuation, so that means you have lied.

The worst thing is that you didn't say it face to face.
I had to heard it from the silence of the death.

It was a lost, it was a waste, even I don't want to recognise it.
but you have to blow away!

By P.W

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Very nice and very sad. Glad to have read your verses. Keep your chin up

 

Well first of all, poems in other languages are only for babel.
Well being honest i have to tell you that the rhimes sound a little bit forced to me but the feeling is there.
I'll be waiting to read more from you.
It's been a pleasure, hugs.

 

A very nice poem, written in a simple manner and well thought out.

Unfortunally it's in the wrong forum and I'm afraid it won't be appreciated as much.

Best wishes.

xoxoxox