Every day and Every night

Este es mi primer poema, aun no esta terminado pero quiero saber que piensan sobre el :::blush:::

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Every day and every night.
This small and sweet song resounds in my ears... thinking about you.
But I live alone in a world.
My world.
My small world of fantasy where it seems that only I am.
But maybe some day has to share it with someone and I hope that you are this person.

Every day and every night.
I think about it.
One day you're close to me in this small world of fantasy.
But then I remember...
Here only am I and the only thing that I do is to look at the Moon.
My Moon, flood of light and peace.
I know her always there only for me.
…Only that I see her very alone
And think that she lacks something...
Maybe a few stars that make this world, this world of fantasy, much better