Good bye

silveriddragon · 21 de Abril de 2023

Good bye my dear,
With no pain,
with no regrets
I will not be happy
Because you are not with me
But it's time
To forget this
I love you
Imperfectly
Incompletely
And you need a real
And perfect instant
In the eternity...

Tsadkiel-17 · 21 de Abril de 2023

Is beautiful. I read it multiple times!

DESIRE SOLE · 21 de Abril de 2023

silveriddragon dijo:
Good bye my dear,
With no pain,
with no regrets
I will not be happy
Because you are not with me
But it's time
To forget this
I love you
Imperfectly
Incompletely
And you need a real
And perfect instant
In the eternity...

Its look like a song in the air...

Si está bien escrito mi comentario, estoy lista para aprender la danza de la lluvia.
ES LINDO TU POEMA, Silver. FELIZ FINDE.

silveriddragon · 25 de Abril de 2023

Tsadkiel-17 dijo:
Is beautiful. I read it multiple times!

Thank you! I am exploring with a poetry in short lines. I found this is like haiku but in English is different.

Have an excellent week!

silveriddragon · 25 de Abril de 2023

DESIRE SOLE dijo:
Its look like a song in the air...

Si está bien escrito mi comentario, estoy lista para aprender la danza de la lluvia.
ES LINDO TU POEMA, Silver. FELIZ FINDE.

Waaaa... A song in the air

Well, I like listening to music and maybe It has footprints of songs.

La danza de la lluvia necesaria por estas tierras en las que últimamente hace mucho calor XD

Muchas gracias amiga Desire. Feliz semana :-D

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