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Hopes

Tema en 'La Torre de Babel' comenzado por Pemberley Winter, 9 de Febrero de 2010. Respuestas: 8 | Visitas: 937

  1. Pemberley Winter

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    - HOPES -


    Everywhere you turn around
    you'll be surrounded with my embrace,
    I'll never let you go, I'll always be standing there..there so close.
    Your hope gives me strengh, you're everything I need and more...
    You're the one I've been looking for.
    My expectations of holding your hand, will never stop,
    I have hopes.
    Those dark walls you built...are destroyed,
    'cause you understood who is your love,
    no matter where you turn around, I'll be there..
    I'll explain what I meant,
    I will be able to see you, my heart will be clean for you.
    I'm your saving grace....the other stuff for me is nothing else.
    My hopes are here..I shall see you again......in this weird story....
    weird story that we called 'ourselves'
    So don't worry, my little piece of heart..I'll be by your side....
    no one will take us apart....I got my hopes in that.


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    Very nice poem Pemberly --Thanks for adding me to your list of friends. My pleasure, of course. I took the liberty of suggesting two changes (both past tense).

    I enjoyed reading this very "hopeful" piece.

    A hug.
     
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  3. Pemberley Winter

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    The pleasure is all mine of having you as a friend AprilRain, thanks so much for passing by and also for the corrections. I own you one!.
    Hugs, Pemb
     
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  4. Redwing

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    Romantic! hopes? yes please, i would like an order :::sonreir1:::.
    Nah seriously, your poem shows a biiiig love and a kind heart so it fits perfect in you, i liked it.
    hugs.
     
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    That fits perfect in me? , that is sooooo sooo sooo sweet of you Red!, you're actually trying to make me blush:::blush:::. First, I'm glad you liked it and that you passed by (of course).
    Oh...and let me tell you something....there's no need to order hopes..everyone has them...even if you don't know it. So what I'm trying to say..is that even YOU....DARKWING....you can have some hopes very very deep. There's no need to order them...you just have to find them!.
    Hugs, hugs, & again tons of hugs my frieeeeennd.
    Pemberley
     
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  6. RA

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    Dear friend Pemberley Winter,
    Glad to feel the joy that you experiment in this poem. Verses that not only are hopes but realities. It seems that you're enjoying the spring of love. Love winter has gone.
    Wonderful poem of love, I love it.
    Fraternally, Ramiro
     
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  7. Pemberley Winter

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    Dear Ramiro,
    I'm so so so so glad you liked it....I know that some people prefer me as a romantic....but I don't know....winter is always there.
    Thank you so much for passing by
    Love, Pemberley
     
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  8. Winterfairy

    Winterfairy Poeta recién llegado

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    This is a poem appropriately called Hopes, it brings a fresh look at the word and its meaning, without hopes we wouldn't be here and the world would be just a big, empty and very cold place. Everyone should have hope for the future and keep our dreams alive, they may not all come true but we'll have fun finding out:)
     
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  9. Pemberley Winter

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    Winterfairy, yes....the most important thing is that we just NEED to have hope...we need to have faith, 'cause if we don't we are lost. We don't know what we want..or where are we standing!. This poem also I think is for youuuu!. you have my hopes!!..and I know you have hopes on life...tht everything will change.for best of course.
     
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