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I See Me Through Your Eyes.

Tema en 'La Torre de Babel' comenzado por Pemberley Winter, 16 de Junio de 2010. Respuestas: 8 | Visitas: 1155

  1. Pemberley Winter

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    Shadows, lines, bodies turning around.
    Images are not clear...at least for me.
    The wind has make it all blind.
    The water annoys my vision of you and I.

    But there you are.....
    I see me through your eyes.
    I can see my eyes, I can see my mouth.
    I can see my smile, whenever you step by.

    Oh yes..there it is.
    This naughty wink to you from me.
    And yes...there is your hand, touching my face.
    Slowly caressing my skin, yes..I see me through your eyes.
    Beautiful vision, great paradise.
    It's all on them. It's all of us.

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  2. Redwing

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    A beautiful romantic poem kinda uncommon in you.

    I liked it, it's like soooo tender and warm (that made me remind a cat o_O) well i was telling you; it also reminded me a song called... "i see you, you see me" performed by "The magic numbers" which is one of my favorite bands (yes, unnecesary info i guess XD).

    I still think that it's weird to see you write romantics, but believe me, i enjoy reading you like that.

    Mmm... no hugs today, just... huge ones XD.
     
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  3. Pemberley Winter

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    Thanks red for step by as you do, I enjoy your interesting comments. why weird?..Am I a queen of tears? hahhahaa. wowwwwww..the magic numbers..i KNOW THAT BAND..but I guess I'll never had the opportunity to listen to that song...I'll hear it and later I'll tell you.
    but I have a doubt.........a cat?----hahhaah you are hilarious!!
    love, pembbbbbbb
     
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  4. orees19

    orees19 Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    it's like a cold fusion... there's nothing further than a guy and a girl finding themselves into each other's eyes... precious lines Pemb, glad to stop by them. My regards and best wishes to you.
     
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    Hey Orees, I'm always glad to see you down here at my writings, Thank you so much for always wishing me the best, I know is just an ordinary greeting, but I really like when people say that. Have a nice day..and again..THANK YOU.
    P.Winter
     
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  6. Nicolle

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    I feel this poem like a rainy but romantic day, when two become one... just cause of love.

    Pleasure to be here.
    XXOO
     
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  7. Pemberley Winter

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    Thanks Nicolle for always being here, I really really appreciated!!!, you are lovely. And the pleasure is mine.
    Pemb
     
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    uooohhh!!! Poeta recién llegado

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    Beautiful poem... i love ... grettings and congratulations...
     
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    Thank you so much for passing by. Have a nice day. Pemb.
     
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