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I was all good.

Tema en 'La Torre de Babel' comenzado por Pemberley Winter, 23 de Diciembre de 2010. Respuestas: 4 | Visitas: 651

  1. Pemberley Winter

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    I was all good, I was bright.
    I was shiny, I did know what I wanted.
    I was good, I was all good.

    But then you came, you destroyed what I had created.
    Your arrogance broke me, and here I am lonely and hopeless.

    I don't know what to do, I'm clueless, shall I follow you?
    I think I'm gonna give up, I'll try no more.

    I'm on your mercy, destroyed me, take me, try to love me.
    You think you can, you are willing to make it right.
    I still don't know about a chance.
    But I'm so afraid of the same story, and also the same end.

    This is why I was good, I was all good.
    Didn't know about you.
    Didn't know and care if love was true.


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    Pemberley Winter
    I know what you are..you're gonna be bad for my bussines..I can realize that.
     
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  2. Redwing

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    Because of the title i thought it was gonna be a christmas poem (you know, like: i've been all good ths year, so santa don't shed a tear... and bring a smile to you and toys for me... la la la, something like that) but then again... pembyhas some surprises under her sleeve (diabolic laugh) It's a melancholic poem! no fucking santa, christmas or those tiny elfs with white and red striped socks and the pinty hats, long ears and stupid songs... sorry, i guess it's too late to say i hate christmas isn't it?... ok, lemme start again.

    I'ts a melancholic poem where you say you were all good and the other person broke your heart and treatedyou like nothing (what a trashy guy let me say). I could say a lot of things about this one, because it happende to me... i was all good and still... i was nothing but a mere game... and i hated that crappy time and also the person.

    Love is blind they say, and that is painfully truth, but still i gues... you shouldn't wait and shall move on. Remembre: there are a lot of guys on the world, one of them must be correct, one of them must love.

    I do not celebrate christmas, but if you do... I wish you the best ones.

    Hugs for you my little pretty miss winter. =)
     
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    I honestly couldn't stop bringing smiles to my face reading your comment where you mention all that christmas things. And yess.I do celebrate christmas, so thank you. And tons of love for you.
    Yes, sad poem, not a christmas one!. I've never did something like that!. yes..there must be one..I KNOW IT!!.
    hugs for you.
    Pemb
     
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    Lovely poem Pem, heartbreaking and heart aching:( Wish you the best Christmas ever!!! Love, Winterfairy
     
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  5. Pemberley Winter

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    Thank you Winterfairyyy!!, It's been a while!. I wish you a very Merry Christmas!
     
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