I would like....

I would like to make you happy..
I would like to whisper to your ear
I would like to share my feelings,
I would like not to fell asleep.​

I would like to tell you,
all this feelings I got inside.
I would like to tell you, that i'm sorry for what I've done.​

I would like to tell you, That I'll always be here.
I would like to tell you, that you are my reason to live.​

I would like to shout, shout to the sky.
I would like to tell everyone..that you are my love.​

All this could be possible, if you were around,
'cause I'm still searching for you, but you never step by.​

THIS IS BASED ON A TRUE EVEN WHICH HAPPENED TO A BELOVED FRIEND OF MINE. YOU CAN COUNT ON ME ALWAYS, GIRL!.

copyrights reserved​

Pemberley Winter
I Know what you are..you're gonna be bad for my bussines..I can realize that.​

 

It is was a pleasure to read your poem.

The end was sad.

hugs **********

 

Dear Rosa,
Hi!, I'm glad that you passed by and left your comment. I appreciated. And yes, the end is sad 'cause I wanted to make a stop to all the happiness and wishes that were mentioned at first. The end, is particulary, the beggining of reality. 'cause all the things we wished, are impossible, so we have to stay with the wishes, because they'll never be true.
Hugs for you!, Pemb.

 

And i would like to tell you that dreams always come true, but that would be a lie. Sometimes we wish too much and recieve nothing, it's all part of life and dog's desire (i meant god, but i'm just not a friend of him).

The poem is beautifull, at the begining it sounds as a romantic one, but at the end... it just turns out to be a melancholic one, so deep and so unfair... that's why i say you are the heart on babel, i admire the way you express emotions while i barely can describe them.

A pleasure my dear babel kid heart... i mean pemb =)

hugs for you.

 

OMG, that was one of the cutest and gratifying things I heard about me. I adore the way you called me: "the heart of babel"...hmm....interesting, I could make a poem about that...but it would be too self-centered ajajajajaja. anyway..thank you so much red for being here, as always.
And yes...I really enjoyed doing this poem..and you know me...love...and sadness...love and sadness...that's me
hugs for you my friend. TONS OF KISSES TO MAKE YOU DAY EVEN HAPPIER!

 

Hi Pem, this is very sweet, I really enjoyed it How are you?
Winterfairy

 

como no se nada de ingles no entendi ninguna papa que te puedo desir yo hablo castellano y asi morire en esta tierra q tanto amo un placer aver vito tu letra aunq no pude leerla

 

i like very much your poem Pemberley a mixture of happiness and sadness well blended all very deep feelings well expressed. That what is life about a bit of everything, so we can learn and keep on moving and growing. You are were we need to be,
things get sort out some time.
thank you for sharing

Merche
from Perth Western Australia

 

Dearest Mercedes,

I couldn't agree more with your comment, it's true. This is life, and as we know...time heal all wounds. Thank you so much for stopping by. I really appreciated. Hugs for you merche. Pemberley.