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I forget the sun, the stars, the moon
I forget the sand, the sea
and all the space that sits between.

I forget to eat, to sleep.
I remember me, but there is no room.

 

Interesante poema, un placer leerlo! un abrazo y estrellas.

 

Hey april, I liked the brief poem I just found =D So, is someone playing unexistence while existence is there? jojo, it is interesting how many things can cause something as brief as this... (I wouldn't be able to say it properly even I tried the whole day, but still... i'll defend myself in short ) Anyway, the thing is that i will adire the way you say things and aim straight to my brains... Oh god! braingasm.... XD

(They (up there i mean (if it exists of course))) Should've done more than one like you ¬¬ in fact i would order one right away... it's just that i wouldn't have enough life to pay or credit cards to exchange XD. In any case, the best thingseare a limited number in life... with just one you is enough to fall in love. (otherwisw i'd be a slave O.O).

Oh and as I told you, here's an answer that fits my taste... of you XD.


You.

I neglect the moon, the stars, the sun,
I neglect the sand, the sea
and all the space that lays between.

I forget to sleep, to eat.
I remembre you... but there's no me.


=D i miss youuu.
Hugs.

 

I'm still thinking about this one..are you there? kidding! I liked it. Short but consistent. Well well doneee! I've missed you!

 

Because your forget, the life is alone an instant, it is necessary to be happy up to aging, my fondness and stars

 

Alberto -a truly flattering gesture to see you on this side of the world, where your presence is the brightest star.

-a thousand thank yous, my friend.

 

Your modesty is ever so interesting to me. Half of your response cracks me up -and the other half... well the other half is simply amazing. Thanks for the reflection -I have never looked so well in a mirror.

Hugs, my friend. All of them.