I'm not sure

Israel JM

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I need to know
What's behind your hair
Not your thoughts
If not all your brain

They think "it's the same"
But only one shows me something
Only a poetry of pain
I'm a wretch, I want a queen

They will go faster
But the death is closest
Close to the bed
My name is not punctured

They call me silent
I put my face in the night
That doesn't represent my love
Nobody understands, I hope

This is called love poetry?
When the darkness puts its hands on me
I'm not sure, but I'm not walking to heaven
When the angels kill me, I will hit my mind
 
I need to know
What's behind your hair
Not your thoughts
If not all your brain

They think "it's the same"
But only one shows me something
Only a poetry of pain
I'm a wretch, I want a queen

They will go faster
But the death is closest
Close to the bed
My name is not punctured

They call me silent
I put my face in the night
That doesn't represent my love
Nobody understands, I hope

This is called love poetry?
When the darkness puts its hands on me
I'm not sure, but I'm not walking to heaven
When the angels kill me, I will hit my mind


I would answer. my dear friend and poet Israel, to your question "Is this called love poetry?"
To me it is a poetry of disturbing verses, some impregnated with romantic surrealism that
sometimes turns Gothic. It is a multifaceted poem; full of volatile metaphors and verses that
may confuse the reader but they are, anyway, lyrical verses. It is such as the product of a dreamy mind
which wants to reach the Olympus Mount.

I congratulate you for capturing the reader within such versatile poetry.

Another big and fraternal hug,

Ulpiano
 

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