1. Invitado, ven y descarga gratuitamente el cuarto número de nuestra revista literaria digital "Eco y Latido"

    !!!Te va a encantar, no te la pierdas!!!

    Cerrar notificación

I'm not sure

Tema en 'La Torre de Babel' comenzado por Israel JM, 9 de Mayo de 2019. Respuestas: 2 | Visitas: 460

  1. Israel JM

    Israel JM Poeta recién llegado

    Se incorporó:
    12 de Enero de 2019
    Mensajes:
    22
    Me gusta recibidos:
    38
    Género:
    Hombre
    I need to know
    What's behind your hair
    Not your thoughts
    If not all your brain

    They think "it's the same"
    But only one shows me something
    Only a poetry of pain
    I'm a wretch, I want a queen

    They will go faster
    But the death is closest
    Close to the bed
    My name is not punctured

    They call me silent
    I put my face in the night
    That doesn't represent my love
    Nobody understands, I hope

    This is called love poetry?
    When the darkness puts its hands on me
    I'm not sure, but I'm not walking to heaven
    When the angels kill me, I will hit my mind
     
    #1
    A Lexema le gusta esto.
  2. Lexema

    Lexema Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

    Se incorporó:
    20 de Abril de 2019
    Mensajes:
    2.576
    Me gusta recibidos:
    2.583
    Género:
    Hombre
    It is nice.

    Well done
     
    #2
  3. Ulpiano

    Ulpiano Obrero de la Poesía

    Se incorporó:
    11 de Enero de 2017
    Mensajes:
    1.127
    Me gusta recibidos:
    786
    Género:
    Hombre

    I would answer. my dear friend and poet Israel, to your question "Is this called love poetry?"
    To me it is a poetry of disturbing verses, some impregnated with romantic surrealism that
    sometimes turns Gothic. It is a multifaceted poem; full of volatile metaphors and verses that
    may confuse the reader but they are, anyway, lyrical verses. It is such as the product of a dreamy mind
    which wants to reach the Olympus Mount.

    I congratulate you for capturing the reader within such versatile poetry.

    Another big and fraternal hug,

    Ulpiano
     
    #3
    A Israel JM le gusta esto.

Comparte esta página