"Jest Reed"

"JEST REED"

Reality is lived
Spoken word is a different dimension
A different direction
As in our story
Only valid in our mind

Mass' perspective contradicts
Appeal or validate
Mandate or annulate
Establish or circle around
What really is True or False?

Unless you accept it

 

Cool stuff, deterministic and minimalist in style. Good read indeed.
I was only surprised by one word choice you made, "annulate", which is generally associated with creatures such as earthworms. Did you mean "annul"?

Have a good day.

 

Thanks for stopping by Ermenegildo. In this write the verse "Mandate or annulate" is closely intertwined with the next "Establish or circle around". Mandate would refer to establish the same way annulate does to circle around. Your comment is also correct in mentioning earthworms as the word also refers to their circles/rings.

 

It was surprising to me because "annulate" it's not a verb in the English language. It's an adjective with a single meaning. But hey, this is all poetry, so flexibility rules.

Have a great evening.

 

Exactly sir. The flexibility native spoken slang provides. Speak it differently, then write it differently!

Regards