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Journey to the valley of the shadows

Tema en 'La Torre de Babel' comenzado por Rafael A. Quiles, 16 de Enero de 2010. Respuestas: 3 | Visitas: 652

  1. Rafael A. Quiles

    Rafael A. Quiles Poeta recién llegado

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    Journey to the Valley of the Shadows


    [FONT=&quot]It just happened.
    She entered the valley of the shadows.
    [FONT=&quot]I was watching. As an expectant,
    astonished.
    So unable to rescue her…
    [FONT=&quot]Her eyes, looking vaguely,
    like trying to recognize
    her surroundings,
    blinking repeatedly
    as an unconscious effort
    to awake, to open her consciousness…
    [FONT=&quot]I was watching her
    walking her journey
    to the valley of the shadows…
    Is a turmoil that absorbs her soul
    and crushed her mind into the unconscious…
    My wife suffers from ALZLHEIMER DISEASE!
    [FONT=&quot]It just happened, so unexpectedly.
    Suddenly her brain, the limbic system,
    the basal glanglia, her memory,
    were the target of the evil mission
    to destroy her neural arquitecture!
    [FONT=&quot]It just happened, so unexpectedly…
    Never in my life should I imagined
    Something like this currently happening.
    [FONT=&quot]Suddenly I became a “caregiver”.
    Suddenly I learned about this treacherous disease
    that steal the mind and the soul
    of its victims…
    [FONT=&quot]During this years
    I have tried to handle it.
    To adapt to the sinister changes
    that little by little erodes
    Lucy’s means of existence…
    [FONT=&quot]But I was decided to fight back.
    I had faith
    I had hope…
    I looked into the problem
    I knocked doors…
    [FONT=&quot]We embarked in trials
    and medications, even though
    the disease continues progressing
    slowly but uncontrollably.
    [FONT=&quot]I am watching her
    walking her journey
    into the valley of the shadows…
    [FONT=&quot]Meanwhile
    we remain together
    with the strength of our love,
    waiting for the final stages
    that will end in total darkness…
    [FONT=&quot]Meanwhile
    we remain together,
    and come to my mind
    those moments of our life…
    Moments of happiness.
    Moments of joy.
    Moments of struggle.
    Moments of adversity.
    Moments of perseverance…
    [FONT=&quot]We have the strength together
    to successfully
    complete the journey
    to the brightness of light!…
    [FONT=&quot]It just happened.
    She entered the valley of the shadows…

    But don’t be afraid my darling
    I will be with you,
    I will walk this journey by your side
    Until the end!
    [FONT=&quot]by Rafael A. Quiles Sr., Methuen, MA
     
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  2. Maramin

    Maramin Moderador Global Miembro del Equipo Moderador Global Corrector/a

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    Si no me equivoco este poema debe presentarse en el foro Torre de Babel, abierto para los poemas que no se presenten en castellano...:::banana:::


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  3. Ciela

    Ciela Poeta veterano en el portal

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    Tal como dice Maramín, este poema debe mudarse al foro correspondiente. Por estos lares... sólo poemas en español. Así que lo colocaré en su espacio específico.


    Saludos desde Buenos Aires.
     
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  4. Rafael A. Quiles

    Rafael A. Quiles Poeta recién llegado

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    Gracias por tu atención, Ciela,

    Este poema, que te invito a leer, me parece que está mas apropiadamente
    ubicado:


    http://www.mundopoesia.com/foros/poemas-de-amor/228499-el-verso-del-amor.html
     
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