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Tema en 'La Torre de Babel' comenzado por lluviadeabril, 13 de Mayo de 2011. Respuestas: 2 | Visitas: 773

  1. lluviadeabril

    lluviadeabril lluvia & rain

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    A friend in the distance
    so close, a thought away.

    A line, a verse in May

    a measly, measly thanks
    for each of your kind ways.


    You are a candid and kind heart

    a voice that sings, a hymn
    and every once is a while

    that blush expressed in modesty.

    Your smile is effortless in depth
    and it should humble me to know
    to know, that you are my friend.

    Instead, I am proud as proud can be
    to have your words as company.


    Regrettably my friend
    I am an imperfect being
    and I must let you know that goodbyes I can't hear.


    You can write them in sand
    or in the air for me to see, but
    I would surely miss
    your halo and its tweak.
    You're a friend in the distance
    yet close, a click away
    your Wings are strong and Red
    Yes, yes, my arm I give to twist
    you're tough, I must I admit!


    I hate to break it to you though,
    that smile I must upset
    your soul comes through the text
    as bright as bright can be
    a pair of wings that soars the skies
    and everyone can see.

     
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  2. Pemberley Winter

    Pemberley Winter Poeta asiduo al portal

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    GO REDWINGGGGGGGG. this is was so sweet and tenderr!!. Congrats you've made a wonderful poem about a wonderful person as Redwing Is. I loved every word of itt. Love you bothhhhh
     
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  3. Redwing

    Redwing Invitado

    Ok... now I'm blushing >.<

    I'm honored and kinda confused because i don't know what to tell you about this April, i enjoyed the whole poem even thought i think you're giving me more credit than it truly is XD. To tell you the truth... i'm happy by having you as a friend because i think of you as someone truly kind and interesting (watch that brain of yours or else i'll borrow it without advice) and somehow, even that i don't know too much from you... i simply like to have you close with all of your points of view and your awesomly brilliant writings.

    About the poem... Says there that you are an imperfect being... that's true, but hey, no one is perfect,besides, i'm against perfection, let's leave perfection for the boring ones ;), i'm just glad you're just like that.

    Goodbyes you can't hear? that makes me think about two ways:

    1)Are you leaving and that's the reason why you said "i would surely miss your halo and its tweak"? ¬¬ Ok, if fer some reason you would someday leave... you have to forcefully tell me, because you don't like to hear goodbyes, but i also don't like to lose my people, and yes, you are one of my comrades, friends, family, psichiatric partner, or however you want to call us ¬¬ so if that's the case... i'll bite you ¬¬

    2)If you don't like to hear goodbyes... relax, i'm planning on to stay for a reaaaally long time =).

    You're also right at the part about being at only one click of distance, so, it means i'll always be here for you my friend.

    Thanks for the poem and your friendship, i enjoyed the last but still enjoy the first of both.

    Hugs fer yeh April godess rain and a bunch different colored flavored kisses.


    P.D. Pemby loves us both? o_O ok... love is in Babel, everywhere i look around XD, nah, tell her i also love you both. Oh and sorry for beaing late April.

    :-*
     
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