Kiss me...

Kiss me under the rain,
for I just can't refrain
my thirst for your kisses,
and your love that pleases
my spirit in pain...

Kiss me under the moon,
for It'll never be soon
nor late for us lovers,
to hide from the others
in our world of loon...

Kiss me under the sky,
for we'll never know why
God won't grant the wishes,
of our souls the pieces
in eternal cry...

 

Mi nivel de inglés no me permite sacar todo el jugo que de seguro tiene, Ricardo.

Un abrazo desde mi mar.

 

Is a good poem, you make that the words could touch the heart of the reader. My five stars goes with you.

 

It's a beautiful poem, great job!!

Saludos..!!!

 

muchas gracias mi amigo...

 

thank u vry much my brother...RRR

 

muchos gracies mi jermanitou...hahahahahhh!!1 RRR

 

That is a song to a loving heart , I really like the way You write here is a perfec example of Your talent , is good to be here , my best whishes my dear friend se you at the ink , Jess

 

thanks Jess for your time and your beautiful words...it is an honor as well as a great pleasure to have you here...take care dude...RRR

 

Tu poema es tan hermoso tan sncero tan lindo tan tan tan jejejej Se ha convertido en mi favorito.

 

Kiss me, under everything..

i really like this writing, cuz i know that you wrote it with a lot of love, and passion, as you do in spanish..

really nice poem.. i like it!

see you soon!
bye

 

merci mon amie...RRR

 

thanx my love...its always a pleasure to here from you! God bless!!! RRR

 

Beautiful poem.
Bueno te lo digo en español, me ha parecido precioso.
Un placer leerte en ingles tambien
Un afectuoso abrazo
Joan

 

thank youvery much!!!

 

I likes it very much ^^

 

glad to hear you liked my poem so much...thanks for coming! RRR

 

Congratulations!!!!! It's wonderful, really. Well done ricardo!

see u

 

thank u very much for visiting and leaving your comments...RRR

 

Sweet thoughts, nice rhyme, a pleasure reading, cheers!

 

thank you verymuch for your words...RRR

 

Its a magic invitation to live and love. Congratulations Ricardo for this beautiful poem. See ya.

 

thanx dude for your beautiful words! RRR