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Tema en 'La Torre de Babel' comenzado por polako4ever, 16 de Agosto de 2008. Respuestas: 4 | Visitas: 830

  1. polako4ever

    polako4ever Poeta fiel al portal

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    Sometimes just life test us,
    to know what we`re made of
    and to find out our weirdness
    painted in black or mauve.



    Sometimes I pick up insanity;
    madness full of love,
    selfish full of bounty…
    what I have above.



    Above I have a song
    above I have gun…
    to fight all the fears,
    I become a seers.



    If you`re afraid
    It`s not me…
    take on me
    and let me stay.



    `Cos you`re the fire,
    of my heart, the lighter.






     
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  2. polako4ever

    polako4ever Poeta fiel al portal

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    Thanks 4 all you`re wellcome to visit anytime :)

    Hughs
     
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    polako4ever Poeta fiel al portal

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    Oh thanks Abstru you`re so nice, i think all my poems always sound like songs, but i think it is because the rhimes, the song i`ve choosen is "i miss you" by Incubus, maybe it is not the best choice but that was exactly what i was listen again and again when i was writing.

    anyways, thanks for taking your time and enjoying it.

    Hughs.
     
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    poroeta Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Nice! I liked the images, the guns and whatnot, liked the meditation and confession of it all, peace.
     
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    polako4ever Poeta fiel al portal

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    Hey poroeta, thanks, that`s such a confession, i made it with one porpouse... to let know someone who is important to me how i am sometimes.

    Thanks for passing by

    PEACE!
     
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