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Like that machine

Discussion in 'La Torre de Babel' started by Bree, Dec 5, 2006. Replies: 2 | Views: 836

  1. Bree

    Bree Poeta recién llegado

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    Like that machine
    I want to be,
    run fast to every part
    and get stopped when you come.

    Like that machine,
    I want to feel
    hours are the same
    to work or to play.

    Like that machine
    I want to dream,
    my mind are pieces
    come from the steel.

    Like that machine
    I want to breath,
    and do all the things as
    the machine does.

    I want to be to you
    like that machine is to me

    Who's the machine?
    I am the machine.
    Like that machine
    I want to be.
     
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    Bree, Dec 5, 2006
  2. Arturo Vergara Godoy

    Arturo Vergara Godoy Poeta asiduo al portal

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    Well, I don't know why and whom you are "a machine", but I can imagine that is for your slave condition into a society. Are we a machines? Are not we a human beings? And the soul, where is it? It's very interesting your poem, and had comunicated me your impression of the life and your circumstance. Congratulations, bree darling ...

    Arturo, from far away ...
     
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    Arturo Vergara Godoy, Dec 5, 2006
  3. Alaric

    Alaric Invitado

    Muy bueno Bree, me gustó tu poema, bellos versos.
    Un saludo.
    Alaric.
     
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    Alaric, Dec 28, 2006

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