Lost on the edge of love

I think I was a fool to believe,
That everything was all right,
or at least that you would stay by my side.​

I was blind, that's something I can't deny.
I didn't hear you, no respect existed for you.
I was self-centered, I recognise.
I used you like some object,
I didn't care about the facts.​

The words are not able to explain, all this I'm suffering
How the misery of the regret consumes me everytime,
everytime I think: "Wasn't I enough?
The tears collide in my head, and the thoughts of foolness are decided to stay.​

It hurts so much when someone can't be with the one they love
When everything dissapears, and your whisper still exist.
The edge of love would be my next home, lost and alone.
'cause now you're with her.
The one who truly loved you, but always failed.
She failed because It was me who cut off the intent.
[COLOR=#000080]I lost you, and now I regret, but the eternity without you,[/COLOR]
[FONT=Georgia][COLOR=#000080]would be fair. For all the things I've done.[/COLOR]
[FONT=Georgia][COLOR=#000080]And for letting you become the most precious jewlery,[/COLOR]
[FONT=Georgia][COLOR=#000080]that would not be again by my side.[/COLOR][/FONT][/FONT][/FONT]​

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[LEFT][FONT=Georgia][COLOR=#000080]BY PEMBERLEY WINTER.[/COLOR]
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If words can not explain what you feel, try singing.

Not a singing voice, but a gypsy sing: With palms and heels.

Good lines. Thanks for compasritlas. Greetings.

 

Heyy!, I'm glad you liked it. I can sing quite well, by the way. But I will try the thing you told me!. Have a nice day!.

 

Your poem is full of regrets, or maybe a lot of guilt for loving someoe who did not deserve to be reached. I can visualize your feelings, but dont take it very seriously. Be happy, love you felt, even if time melt it away. Thanks for letting me read your poem in need. Welcome to this Tower of Babel, and invite you to read a few of mine in this space that we all like to dealt. Stars I give with cheers. Saludos Paloma2

 

Thank youuu!
I will be absolutley glad to read some of your poems.

 

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How much sadness in your lines, it's unbelievable how you made this with an amazing flow of emotions and some images I saw on mi mind, it's... great and I liked it but... if words are not able to express... why not some pictures about you 2 together to remind him how beatiful it was, or... kidnapp him! amm... nop, that was just a joke :::sonreir1:::.
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I'm glaaaaaaddd you liked it!. mmm..well..I'm considering that kidnapping thing....hhahah. Greetings!:::hug:::