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Love at short sight (DUET: PEMBERLEY WINTER- LLUVIADEABRIL)

Pemberley Winter

Pemberley Winter

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Love at short sight (Duet, Pemberley Winter-Lluviadeabril)

Forget the flowers today
my love I have a garden
within your hands.

Today let's hurry, let’s simply rush
follow me into the valley of my heart,
flowers will bloom, and so will I.

Each kiss a bud, waters the lips
truly immersed, let's intertwine
as petals fall, you will be mine
give me in bliss, the sweetest wine.

You sometimes kills me, and others not
but I don't care, if it is poison, if it is death,
and my life comes to a tragic end
still I know I'll love you then.

Give me your sense,
give me you heart.

Let's make the garden,
a single dream of you and I,
in it you’ll see, flowers in bud
waiting for you, waiting for love.

And if you are ready, to give me love,
I’ll find a way to make mine yours
If not, still stay –let’s just have sex,
and then, tomorrow tell me your name
for in the rush, I will forget.

That’s quite okay, forget the name
tell me instead, why am I here?


Pemberley Winter- Lluviadeabril
 
Última edición:
Oh my freacking god! O.O i'm truly shocked right now.

How on earth did this happened? ¬¬

:O i just can't bealive it, it's not fair, it's not fair :S

Ok, ok, ¬¬ i'll give my best at commenting even thought i'm not agreed with this situation ¬¬.

The poem has a good rithm, the combination of you two is pretty amazing... i never expected to see something like this, it surprised me, but i enjoyed it and i'm happy. The context... i first thought it was kinda like a love poem, and i kept that impression during the reading, until i got to the ending part, then i realized... it was a one night view and it sounded kinda like a not wanted thing for the ones in the poem.

You two write and express in a very different way, but even with that... you managed to make something which i have no words to describe... Oh, and pemby used more rhymes nad they're quite well used and does not sound forced... =) i like rhymessss =D... April using images and pemby emotions and rhymes... oh god! i don't know what to think or feel :s, i 'm happy, i'm shocked, i'm mad because no one told me ¬¬ i'm confused... i have my two babel girls on one poem together >.< god, god, god. >.< i'm getting carried away... ¬¬ i'm oficially... i don't know how the hell i am but i'm mad ¬¬.

it's been a pleasure... and more than that, i liked it and i'm hopping this won't be the last time you two get together.

Hugs and kisses for both of you... it reminded me a trio...ok... better to go and cool out a little.

thanks for the moment.
 
Redwing dijo:
Oh my freacking god! O.O i'm truly shocked right now.

How on earth did this happened? ¬¬

:O i just can't bealive it, it's not fair, it's not fair :S

Ok, ok, ¬¬ i'll give my best at commenting even thought i'm not agreed with this situation ¬¬.

The poem has a good rithm, the combination of you two is pretty amazing... i never expected to see something like this, it surprised me, but i enjoyed it and i'm happy. The context... i first thought it was kinda like a love poem, and i kept that impression during the reading, until i got to the ending part, then i realized... it was a one night view and it sounded kinda like a not wanted thing for the ones in the poem.

You two write and express in a very different way, but even with that... you managed to make something which i have no words to describe... Oh, and pemby used more rhymes nad they're quite well used and does not sound forced... =) i like rhymessss =D... April using images and pemby emotions and rhymes... oh god! i don't know what to think or feel :s, i 'm happy, i'm shocked, i'm mad because no one told me ¬¬ i'm confused... i have my two babel girls on one poem together >.< god, god, god. >.< i'm getting carried away... ¬¬ i'm oficially... i don't know how the hell i am but i'm mad ¬¬.

it's been a pleasure... and more than that, i liked it and i'm hopping this won't be the last time you two get together.

Hugs and kisses for both of you... it reminded me a trio...ok... better to go and cool out a little.

thanks for the moment.
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Awe, Redwing...

We were wondering (Am I right Pemb?), what took you so long it's been there for days-I am so very happy you liked it. This project was a lot of fun and yes, it does take a turn in the end (all in the name of fun and "girl power" -as Pemb says).

I really enjoyed working on this with Pemb and am looking forward to more. A trio, great idea! Why don't you come up with the beginning and we'll take it from there (Pemb I am volunteering you, but can one possibly refuse after the overwhelming comment by Redwing?).

Thanks again Redwing and Pemb all my thanks to you.

The warmest hugs to both my friends :) Cheers!
 
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My goooooood, Redwinggggg. You are one of the sweetest person I've ever met! AND YES!, WHAT A SURPRISE YOU GOT!, ahahaha. I started to laugh when you said that you were mad and blablablablal. It was funny. I personally loved to work with April Rain, she is so talented and wonderful. I'll be delighted to work with her again. AND YES...YOUR BABEL GIRLS ROCKED THE FORUM!. Perhaps the three of us can do a poem related to babel (?) andd yes...I'm kidding (just in case). This poem is wonderful, I enjoyed every minute of it. And I still have a smile on my face about your comment Red, GOT CHA!,. Thank you April for this oportunity, and of course I'll be ready for another poem. I adore you guys!, thank you so muuuuuuuch.
Tons of love, Pemb
 
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