Maybe This Time We'll Win

Even when I felt, like I wasn't enough
I try to focalize you and me at the paradise.
You were with shine, shining like a star.
Everyone dissapeared and the world collided!.

Your love and anger made the perfect pair.
You were for me, hugging me with strength
If I was falling, your hand would took me to earth.

All the strangers, that watched us,
were envy of your stars.
Something's bound to begin.

Is our time, is our song,
No one will have control.
You just guide me, I just follow.
This time we'll win.

No one is odd here.
We're just human beigns
Don't care about what they say
Don't care about their suspect
I just wanna close my eyes with you.
Feeling you breath holding me 'till death.
'cause you and I, will survive.
And the world won't keep us far apart.
My prediction was right, you'll be by my side.

Walking on sunshine, you'll smile
Oh,your hot breath inspires me strenght
We've come together to live.
Maybe this time we'll win.


By Pemberley Winter
I KNOW WHAT YOU ARE....YOU'RE GONNA BE BAD FOR MY BUSSINES, I CAN REALIZE THAT.

COPYRIGHTS RESERVED!​

 

A romantic, it's good to see you like this even tough i like more the sad ones.
I liked the images and the positivism you put in this, so it's been a pleasure to read you as a romantic.

 

Dear Redwing, yaaaaaaayyy...So happy you liked it! I was like so scared if you didn't, in fact, I wasn't so convince with this poem at all. I tried to write nice things as you told me......and.. you say that was good (that's cool)...although my passion are the sad ones hahahah, Thanks for reading it,
Love, Pemb.:::sorpresa1:::

 

Love the poem, it is very sweet and evoques images of a fairy tale kind of love, full of dreams and hopes and the certainty that at the end love will always win
Love,
Winterfairy

 

Waoo, congratulations for a good and inspired Poem, Love and Melancholy, clear imagens in all the words, is good read you,because is my first time, and i'm glad to do it, greetings and stars to you, from california.

 

Of course Winterfairy!, no matter how strange and bad forces could come around, love would always win.
Love, Pemb:::sorpresa1:::

 

Thank you so much for your lovely comment JBR, I'm so glad you liked it. Hope I can continue reading some of yours too
Love, Pemberley :::sorpresa1:::