Minstrel fish

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MINSTREL FISH






Tears apart turn into pieces


My whole chamber of bones


remains in pain.


In a series of pumpkins beheaded


my life cries as a beggar tied in chains.




I never dreamt of such a crime


of New romantic trapped in a rush


During the night,


I felt a terrible poison ripping


my soul of knight of Ballantine’s.




And if you live for the awakening


of shivering news of hope and joy


after a date,


let me give you an advice of wise Goliath


who’s never late.




Fish you


may find


Entangled into plastic rings


you’d lose your head


before the rhyme


cut fringes.




Never boil


venom


particles


In vein,


only fresh


seafood save us to condemn.









Law De Lay
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Dear friend and poet "manolovni",

Your series of extra sensory ramblings, impact the reader with your verses suigéneris,
because of the long separation that is between them. Anyway, you get your goal:
leave the reader impressed with the original advice that your imagination offers to the
reader at the end of the poem.

With my congratulations, receive a big and fraternal hug,

Ulpiano

 

Thank you very much Ulpiano. I am glad of hearing your positive point of view. This poem is really special for me, since English is not my mother language and I had never attempted to achieve such a goal before. Law de Lay will be willing to write more poems like this in the future for sure.
Feel very happy about it. A fraternal hug for you too.