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My gothic symphony

Tema en 'La Torre de Babel' comenzado por BlackHess, 15 de Julio de 2012. Respuestas: 2 | Visitas: 668

  1. BlackHess

    BlackHess Poeta recién llegado

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    I thank you for covering this black heart with snow
    I thank you for being so cold
    This gothic symphony that plays in my part
    Madness forever shall be my company at heart

    Hope for insanity
    To give me a chance
    To lay in it's arms
    To be normal again

    I'm no longer a puppet
    With no soul or heart
    I'm just an actress
    Who chose her own part
     
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  2. darwinsin

    darwinsin Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Versos muy interesantes, es un placer poder disfrutar de tu talento, es un poema bastante fluido con tintes opacos, esta imagen me encantó:

    "...cubrir este corazón negro con la nieve..."

    Bienvenida al portal, cuídate y chispas estelares a tu pluma---
     
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  3. Aisha Baranowska

    Aisha Baranowska Poeta que considera el portal su segunda casa

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    Nice poetry. :) I write mostly in Spanish and sometimes, also in Portuguese, even less frequently in Polish which is my language, by the way. In my whole life, I have learnt a couple of languages, including English, which is probably the language I know better than other languages that I have learnt, yet, I used to have trouble writing poetry in English... I have always thought English was not a poetical language in itself. It is only recently that I've started writing also in English, therefore, I have written but a few pieces that could be considered good, in this language in particular...

    I like the way you wrote this poem. Greetings from Poland! ;-)

    Aisha B.
     
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