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Tema en 'Prosa: Torre de Babel de Prosa' comenzado por RMBV, 29 de Abril de 2012. Respuestas: 3 | Visitas: 2155

  1. RMBV

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    (Blink) / It’s like when you’re feeling down / no move / heavy lids that deny to open wide / missing something that you don’t remember / you head it’s a mess / memories colliding / and you get high as a way out / avoid sunlight / running away without stops / days come and go and you’re still the same / fade away with the smoke / blow away in every soft pain / everything it’s dead or just a piece of shit / collapse from way high onto the sky / remain loveless / minutes feeling like days / standing in the cold carrying an odd faithful wish / with nothing left / empty – lonely – stoned – with a silly smile –falling apart / no more stars to watch / a trip of a lifetime / the past that covers you inside out / unseen images stocked in my mind / no audio for sentimental purposes / all it’s gone even though I could touch it right now / nothing it’s mine / nothing I have / feeling dizzy when you close your eyes for a moment / what’s going on? / where am i? / corrosive / chairs floating in the air / some people still on theirs / they salute with a coffee cup / talking loud / hopefully they could understand / nobody remember what I just said / ask again / like weed in between buildings / completely forgotten / believe in what you lie / bite the hook / rise above with me / keep tide / keep rotted / take it from a different side / your words and letters will be important stuff after your death / they’ll realize that you were a thing / you were a number / were…. / it won’t let you out / remain in silence while you’re breathing / they’ll read you soon / listen your own voice inside you / what do you want? / I don’t know / am I lost it? or I never found it? / involuntary secrets that you don’t create / secrets crawling looking for the light’s sewer / blink / take it from your insides / tender / don’t stay / escape / look back so you’ll run faster / acid tapes being played in your forehead / sharp notes smashing squeezing your brain / distorted voices talking white noise / things that you never put on your eyes / but they are there / your vision being corrupted by glitch sequences / walls built with sadness / I will never forget / undelivered messages dropping from the sky / no reason to open them / just more bunch of crap and fucking lies / jumping trying to reach a chair / nobody cares / no one helps / they just watch a human form trying to escape from here / are you going to be there? / probably you only need to change the channel or close the electric window / curtains down and performing anyway / your eyes would feel the actress moving beneath / it’s calling with her moves / feel her each time she blinks / head down when you don’t feel her anymore / her blinks inside you / letting you walk or not / common feelings / common senses / common words / all in a blink of an eye / let yourself down / worthless sounds / murmuring truth / spit the colours from your mouth to the wall / from the wall to the memories / from the memories to your tired eyes / lids that never share the beauty of these crashed eyes / reborn and die / flames will take everything / don’t be afraid / take my hand / will jump together to the bottom / blink (if you want) / from the underground to my lungs / completely gone / with nothing left to say / here and there / smiling to everybody / rescue me / softly traps that you want to stick your mouth on them / they’re calling /​
     
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  2. donatien

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    Is this some sort of song? Why the amount of slashes? Its tricky to read it like this.
     
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  3. RMBV

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    hehe looks like a song but its not, but thnks for the idea lol / slashes because what i just think i write it down without editing or adding stuff / sequences of random thoughts that tells something also creates an abstract ambient / i cannot explain it at all / but now you know / thnks for reading
     
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  4. ROSA

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    Why write so special? Do not you think it would read better if you do it more easily? anyway thanks for letting us your letras.Saludos
     
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