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Not A 'Foolosophy' Anymore, This Is Called Love.

Tema en 'La Torre de Babel' comenzado por Pemberley Winter, 28 de Enero de 2010. Respuestas: 4 | Visitas: 639

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    I'm falling, and he is still doesn't calling,
    I'll give him another try,
    It might be this time.
    'cause you gave me something,
    that made me scare at first,
    but now I'm ready to fight for it till' the end.

    What I said it was a 'foolosophy', now is my life,
    I won't deny it, I'm learning how to love.

    You are the one who can guide me straight,
    but the point is.....you just gave up,
    and left me in the middle of the process.

    I'm ready to start all over again,
    the felling may come back,
    but please tell me you'll be here by my side.
    This is our chance to make everything bloom.
    Take my hand and close your eyes, I'll see you soon.

    By Pemberley Winter
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  2. Redwing

    Redwing Invitado

    Kinda reminded me to myself :S, I am also learning about emotions and well... i'm learnig how to love, to express and all that stuff I always disliked, so i felt conected to your poem and that's why i can tell you "Keep trying if he's worth of it" if he can guide you... then trust on it and keep moving.
    A very uncomfortable pleasure :::sonreir1:::, hugs.
     
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    Love lines that are called to love a reunion.
    The expectation of a desired scene, consensus and full of love for others.

    Good lines Pemberley.

    A thousand thanks for sharing. A hug.
     
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    I'm really really happy for you that you are learning how to express things that were harder for you to do them.
    And you are very right...if it is worth it, then you shall give it a shot!, you might have something to lose or not, but as long as you think is worth it..you should. Oh...and of course I noticed you are learning how to express....I've read your poem for your girl. But I didn't comment it because I thought it was not correct for me to write anything.
    uncomfortable pleasure? WOW...hhahaha.
    The Pleasure is always mine.
    Pemberley
     
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    Cesar,
    It is always a big pleasure for me that a great writer like you is beign here. I'm glad that you liked it, and that you understand what I was trying to say.
    Tons of hugs, Pemb
     
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