One autumn afternoon

To rise and fall with you
on a bed of golden foliage,
one autumn afternoon
counting sins and stars anew. ​

All is peaceful when I rest on those leaves
where you write autumn springs.​

It is there that thoughts grow
and I’m meek.​

 

ufff...no se..ingles..me los traduces en un mensaje privado porfa?

llluvia fina y elegante del atardecer, enamoras los paisajes del alma que me vió nacer.....saludos..

 

love is like going with the flow... so easily... so calmly... such a nice place you've found... liked it hehe... regards.

 

Melodious and sensorial verses...What a pleasurable fall...

It was nice reading you.

yOnOsoyEva

 

Hola muy lindo tu poema, pero a pesar que esta en ingles, deberias revisarlo para que sea mas fluido , pienso yo.saludos

 

I loved Autumn, you know..it is a season to be calm, to think, and knowing is cold, is a very good season to love, to be with the person we feel comfortable. Everything must take its course in a very soft and calm way. Excellent poem April....very relazing.
hugs, Pembb

 

Dearest Pemberly,

Your words elate the heart and flatter the pen. I share your fondness for the landscape on an lazy afternoon where calm of thought brings peace of mind and all is, but a short walk to surrender will and sip the quiet through the eyes.

Thanks for sharing such a view.

Hugs.

 

Gracias compañero,
Lo estaré considerando, agradezco sugerencias ya que la fluidez para mi siempre es un reto.

Un abrazo.

 

la simpleza de las imágenes me apasionó..besos

 

Un dia de estos, Mask. Un dia de estos - lo traduzco.

Un abrazo.

 

What a kind comment. Thank you, I'm so very happy you enjoyed it.

A hug.

 

Gracias Poeta, un halago de los más grandes su presencia y comentario.
Un abrazo cariñoso.

 

On the contrary, thank you so much for such a wonderful comment.
A hug.

 

Would you mind to write me an autumn spring, my beloved Rain ? La he hechado mucho de menos. Sonrío ahora que la leo de nuevo.

 

I am in utter disbelief!

Welcome back and of course, I would not mind.

An autumn spring starts with the warmth of your visit
long lost Poet and follows in the kindness of your words.

A hug and a reciprocal smile.

 

I'd like to be on that leaves too...
A placer to read you, Lady.
Regards, glory and stars for you.

 

What a sweet comment.

A hug.