Paradise in my hands

But can anyone see if I am sad?
I'm the best hiding what I really feel
But that hurt's as thousands knives in my heart.


Sometimes I wake up and I see that you are not with me,
But I guess that's how it is supposed to be, isn't it?
Tonight is one of those nights when I'd kill for have you here
Just to feel that the time is stopped and the world is just mine.


I really don't want to cry, it won't help
So what can I do when I'm hopeless? I need you
The war would be nothing to fight if it was cause of you
Is there something that I wouldn't do to be there?


Sometimes I lay down and let the ideas come to me,
That's when I think, Who I was before you came into my life?
I need some help to remember, because all looks dark and murky
But since you are with me all looks brighter, not perfect but better than before
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[SIZE=3][FONT=book antiqua]But was it every one of those mistakes a step towards you?[/FONT][/SIZE][FONT=book antiqua]
[SIZE=3][FONT=book antiqua]Often I'm insecure and jealous, but baby I can't help it[/FONT][/SIZE][FONT=book antiqua]
[SIZE=3][FONT=book antiqua]You're someone really good, and I don't want to lose you.[/FONT][/SIZE][FONT=book antiqua]
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[SIZE=3][FONT=book antiqua]I will fight with every beat of my heart, and I won't give up[/FONT][/SIZE][FONT=book antiqua]
[SIZE=3][FONT=book antiqua]You worth every tear that I had already cried, and I'd cry millions more[/FONT][/SIZE][FONT=book antiqua]
[SIZE=3][FONT=book antiqua]Maybe someday I'll finally found me between your arms[/FONT][/SIZE][FONT=book antiqua]
[SIZE=3][FONT=book antiqua]Smelling your skin against mine, feeling the paradise in my hands.[/FONT][/SIZE][FONT=book antiqua][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font][/font]​

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so very sincere and those classic emotions that we all go through, ah poetry...

 

Beautiful poem, Denisse, you left your soul within, naked... I hope that he wont last his response after you. My best wishes. It has been a pleasure to read your verses. A hug

 

Thanks a lot for your comment Arana

 

Thanks thanks thanks It's such a pleasure that someone with exprience like you read me