Perhaps a mistake

Loneliness I wait​

loneliness I hope​

my only wish is just a break​

so I can really go.​

We have built so many wonders​

and we have crossed so many seas​

but it’s so fair to wonder​

Is there so much more to see?​

But I don’t have the courage​

and I don’t have the guts​

to take away what I have said​

to break what I have promised.​

It seems so silly now​

but once upon a time​

I really meant that vow​

that today does not look fine.​

I know what you are thinking​

and yes, perhaps it was a huge mistake,​

[SIZE=3]because today the freedom it’s too expensive[/SIZE]​

[FONT=Book Antiqua][SIZE=3]but I just don’t want my cage.[/SIZE][/FONT]​

 

Very good. I star u

 

[COLOR=black][FONT=Verdana]Great poem---full of mixed emotions--the want for freedom, but hesitance to pay the price..A disdain for a cage that oppresses wings that want to fly.[/FONT][/COLOR][FONT=Verdana]
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-Very nice![/FONT][/font]

 

The limit of human achievement is the laziness of imagine beyond.

Interesting lines.

Greetings.

 

Thank you Cesar, I always enjoy reading your poems and your opinions about mines