Pink Death

im bleeding inside, in my mind,
just my imagination,
but its the worst death,
too bad, too hurts,
just a death soul...

outside, my pretty face smiling,
nobody knows, no ones help me,
with all this people arround me,
with all this lonely inside...

so, why i am still here???
if my souls gone, who am i???
nobody knows, no ones help me,
with all this pain and darkness...

can you save me from this pink death???
can you return to me, one soul, one love???

what you gonna do for me???
what you gonna do for us???
what you gonna do for love???​

 

I liked your poema very much. Pink death? I sounds like a punk-rock song or something similar. I realy like it!

Perhaps you should take a look at tour grammar. I failed my grammar exam so I'm not the best help you can get... :s But if you let me I can try.

Hugz!

 

THANK YOU for your help about grammar jeje i wrote it realy fast, but my next poem gonna be perfect, i hope so.. jeje...read you soon...kisses...TaM...