Poor Emily, That Little Soul.

I remember how she turned to me and said:
Come and feel the music of life.
I am not going to teach you how to dance,
you just have to feel it..just as love.​

Poor Emily, she thought she had discovered world,
She was conviced she had it all,
money, licors, and the man from above.​

Her Life was a show, lights, dance, sexyness & love.
But when the curtains close, she felt miserable..yes..poor soul.​

Oh Emily dear..if you had just listened.
I told you it was all about that!
No one needs to buy you, you derserved a lot not alike that!.​

Poor little soul, walking in the street.
Begging for some attention..begging for a direction.
Crying for a dance, crying for a man.
Pretending nothing happened...pretending she is a star.​

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Pemberley Winter
[B]I Know What You Are..You're Gonna Be Bad for my Bussines...I can Realize That.[/B]​

 

So nice to see you and share your poem. Stars and good start. Paloma2

 

Yes Paloma! It's been a while!..so happy to hear from you!. thank you for passing by and your stars!.
Pemb

 

Dearest Pemb,
You have described poetically and with accurate details the soul of a girl of the street. What a pity that she has not listened to your wise advice! You continue being a great and versatile poet while I continue admiring your poems. Sincere congratulations.
Fraternally,
Ramiro

 

Dearest Ramiro,

I'm glad you liked my poem, This time I tryed to do something a little bit more diferent......I didn't talk about my "miserable" life...I talked about another person's miserable life. And thank you for saying that I'm versatile....that's a great comment..because it means that I can write what I want to write, in different ways..and I can write anything.
Hugs, Pemb

 

Different style of poem, i liked it very much, the description of emily is fantasticly sad and also a plastic life of exess.
Mmm... i guess this is one of my favorites now, i'm amazed.
Pemb... Wow, that's all i can say.
Hugs for you y dear pem.

 

Redwing...your favourite one? that's greattt!, I'm glad you liked it..I tryed to do something different..I guess It actually worked.
Loooveee, Pemb