Poured The Wine.

I am undeserving
of your words
your heart, your soul
a moment of your time
{I dare not ask
for your forgiveness}
Open your eyes now
no longer afraid
that I will hurt you
I could never again
be the one to leave you
love you, hate you
and betray you
Let go of my hand now
take in all my lies
{I confess
when you were drunk
I poured the wine}
Walk away
leave me behind
my eyes won’t cry
nor will they plead
they show no love
to keep you here
‘Cause when you were drunk
I poured the wine
When you loved me
I questioned why
When still you stayed
I said goodbye
{Could never say, “I love you”
I refuse to lie.}​

 

hola jaja en ingles esta muy lindo el poema
un beso

 

Gracias. Me alegra saber que lo encuentras lindo. Saluditos, cuídate.

 

a little too cliche, sorry babe.

 

I like to know of you.

Nice and sad poem.

Regards Mariposita.

 

Cliché? Is english your first language? I don't expect anyone to truly understand every aspect of the poem. But thanks for stopping by. Perhaps you're right...

 

Gracias. Me alegra saber
que haya sido de tu agrado.
Saludos, cuídate...

 

"when you were drunk i poured the wine" me quedo con ese verso que tanto te culpa y a la vez te libera...

 

Ay, ¡gracias!
Me encanta que
hayas entendido
lo que quise expresar.
"tanto te culpa
y a la vez te libera"
Muchas gracias por pasar.
Saludos, cuídate mucho.

 

Excellent poem!!!!!!
I enjoyed it very much, really a pleasure.
Congratulations.
Alaric.

 

Tenía que postearte mariposita
luego de leerte,
la tristeza más para él creo yo
que locuras... y si muere.... bien
y si vive, lejos mejor.....
pero que de alguna forma se vaya!
que locura como lo sumerges en la culpa...
muy bueno querida amiga,
un gusto leerte luego de tanto tiempo.

Un Salud y Un Abrazo.​

 

Thank you everyone for reading, and for your words.
Saludos y abrazos...