Remember me

Do you remember the day
we first met
you had sunglasses
and my lips where red.
You sat beside me
and the words in my head
where flying around me
like bees in the rain.
We met sitting in the ground
eating grapes, opening mouths
laughing about our lives
wishing our lives to be found.
But you left
I could not survive
everyday
i had you in my mind.
So today
wherever you are
you will
remember me
you will
remember me.

 

eeeeeeeeeeeeee the problem no speak english i sorryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

 

Good Beginning And A Weak Ending, Try To Explain Everything Better. Describe More The Actions, Places & Things. Lets Improve A Little Better. Thnks With Respect: Rmbv

 

Thank you very much RMBV, you know what? I was thinking the same thing so I will be more careful in the next poem, thanks, bye.

 

Beautiful poem, my friend, a hug and stars, i hope read you soon

 

Thank you very much Lu, im glad you like it, wish you a wonderful day!

 

Thanks Gerardito,a hug and stars for you too...